His old leader comes back the entire platoon traumatized by his pranking and blackmails him into finishing a super weapon Kiruru like thing that copies every attack and was supposed to bring their platoon honor but was ended due to its volibility. It’s basically a fic with some ocs about Kululu’s old platoon (I made them) before the Keroro platoon. I have a fic I’m really excited about because the first chapter seems really good but I honestly…need a bit of …idk help? Advice on it? Because I’m 3 chapters in and those three chapters are fairly long but I feel like I’m losing the momentuem on the third chapter, like it’s completely lost it’s focus to focus on fluff and the fluff and romantic stuff goes on too long or something. かすかに響くよ その声が (kasuka ni hibiku yo sono koe ga) 奇蹟の光 繋がる手と手 (kiseki no hikari tsunagaru te to te) いつしかやがて結びつく (itsushika yagate musubitsuku) 聞かせてあげよう子供たち (kika sete ageyou kodomo tachi) 街の灯りも緑も消えた (machi no akari mo midori mo kieta) 凍てつく夜は もう明けぬ (itetsuku yoru wa mou akenu)
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